Swagger Vance Presents "Bottom Line: Dollar Sign" The Mixtape...

[theman080]

1. Intro Bars (Dreamin...)
2. Nuthin But A Swagg V Thang
3. I Got 5 On It
4. Ill Combo feat. Contradiction
5. Perkosett Heaven
6. RIP Season
7. Scenario 2009 feat. G.Adams
8. RIP Season Pt. II
9. FLOW (produced by Nathan Slimm)
10. I Do Drugs

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anyone who takes the time to d/l and peep I appreciate it greatly...

[Sicilian Spit]

You are a great writer. Great form, ill rhymes, you definitely know what you're doing with a pen. Apart from the quality of the recording, the only criticism I would have is that sometimes you're too dope a writer for your own good. As in sometimes you can't keep up vocally with what you write. As in sometimes it sounds weird or you get a little off beat trying to keep up.

That happens to me once in a while while I'm recording and when I notice it I usually try to go back and change the words around a bit to make it sound smoother or give myself a quick breath.

I thought FLOW was good, the RIP Season tracks were tight, and your part on Ill Combo was nice, although the guy with you on that track I was not feelin. Being from the Bay, I would have liked to see you do more justice to the "I Got Five On It" joint. Same thing for "Nothin But A Swagg V Thang." Your flow kind of stays the same over every song, whereas I feel like you need to adapt it to fit certain beats. These two are cases in point because they are different sounds than everything else you rap over, distinct West Coast joints, and they should get different treatment accordingly.

Overall though, these joints were pretty nice and there were definitely a couple I'll keep in my iTunes and put on from time to time. Keep goin.

Check out my latest tracks. They might not be your thing, but any peepage and feed is appreciated.

[theman080]

really good look sir

I'll check out all your shyt lata