Taking a crack at this....my first beat!

[bboystylez]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5747347798a1dd0a/



feedback would help

[P.U.R.E.]

:yes:

sh!t is dope

[Bamma]

first beat huh? i wish my first beat sounded this good.

[bboystylez]

thanks ya'll...i've been messing with fruity loops for about 3 months now

[Turbulent]

congrats man. i like it. very dope for a first beat. i can tell you have a lot of potential. i like the end too. keep working at it mayne

[VA Residential]

Pretty good for a first beat. The only thing about it is that is seems a lil too quiet at some parts. Maybe put a some more around it or switch it up a lil bit more. Still you got potential, sounds much better than my first beat lol.

[Mr.Omega]

The drums are nice yo. Ill be waiting for ya second drop.

[Thirty3 Degrees]

Pretty good for a first beat. The only thing about it is that is seems a lil too quiet at some parts. Maybe put a some more around it or switch it up a lil bit more. Still you got potential, sounds much better than my first beat lol.
LOL, my first beat is embarrassing. :sad:

[illstrick5]

this is pretty tight, yeah much better than my first beat, even alot of my beats now, keep pushing and getting better fam peace

[bboystylez]

thanks for the feed back ya'll...Even though its sounds ok for my first beat i do admit i put ALOT of time just to make it...Im really weak in making snare,kicks,and bass IMO...what advice can u give to make it sound more realistic?

[thanoblepimp]

Thats an ill first beat bruh !!!damn my first joint sounded like someone put a bunch of rocks in a bucket and shook it around while hitting it with a stick...