1st Official Beat Finished

[coopb2005]

MY FIRST BEAT:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/53286049f1938127/

THIS IS THE FINAL VERSION (THE LINK BEFORE WASN'T)


please all feedback helps...thanks!

[coopb2005]

sorry gotta bump it cuz i picked a dumb thread title

[T O N Y M.]

its hella unique and thats cool. the strongest part is the drums for sure, i'd maybe work on the melody cus u only got a few notes just keep experimenting, i would also add a bassline.

[coopb2005]

how do u think i could expand on the melody? i'm completey ignorant to beat making. and how do i add a bassline using FL?

[Thirty3 Degrees]

Check out the videos on this youtube channel:

http://www.youtube.com/user/nfxbeats

You'll learn a lot, and he explains stuff pretty good.

[coopb2005]

haha i was just lookin at one of his vids...i did a bassline tho real quick. i kept it the same pattern thru out the song along w/ the background melody.

[coopb2005]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5328540699999288/

w/ the bassline...gotta change up the melodies

[coopb2005]

that melody of the bassline sounds awful though...thinkin bout just leaving it out

[coopb2005]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/53286049f1938127/

this is the final version...i changed the bassline. i dont think i can do too much more w/ it w/ my limited experience. time for me to expand my horizons. PLEASE FEEDBACK ON THE FINISHED PRODUCT

[T O N Y M.]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/53286049f1938127/
this is the final version...i changed the bassline. i dont think i can do too much more w/ it w/ my limited experience. time for me to expand my horizons. PLEASE FEEDBACK ON THE FINISHED PRODUCT

it sounds aight but i think it may be a hard beat to rap over.

[coopb2005]

it def is...i tried to do that beat for someone w/ a unique flow. a unique catchy flow on that diff beat may lead to good things. my next beat will b more for the mass of rappers though.

[coopb2005]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qg4ItjR1_SM

just thought of the name sound crush too haha