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Greedy G
12-03-08, 11:43 PM
I could make the first words the last fuzzy herb in bags servin halves to jus to splurge wit cash/ damn near traumatized yea my nerves is bad/ me and the streets go together like a nerd and math/ recite.....words that grab get the urge to laugh/ cuz its funny yall bummy I emerge with swag/ they wanna know **** but dont got the nerve to ask/ im in the party smoked out gettin birds to flash/ got drunk grabbed keys jumped curbs and crashed/ got blunts? got trees got birds to smash/ got pumps got 3's desert birds and mags/ got jumped grabbed heat let em burn and blast/ burn his ass to ash cuz the terms was bad left a ***** in the dirt like worms and grass
Sicilian Spit
12-04-08, 11:53 PM
This was coo. I could tell just by reading the pace of the flow. Got slightly repetitive, like using the word 'bird' hella times, but overall was cool, I like the style. You should change the way you present it though. I think line form is better.
Greedy G
12-08-08, 12:08 PM
Iight bet
W.I.Z.E.
12-12-08, 03:28 PM
I could make the first words the last fuzzy herb in bags servin halves to jus to splurge wit cash/ damn near traumatized yea my nerves is bad/ me and the streets go together like a nerd and math/ recite.....words that grab get the urge to laugh/ cuz its funny yall bummy I emerge with swag/ they wanna know **** but dont got the nerve to ask/ im in the party smoked out gettin birds to flash/ got drunk grabbed keys jumped curbs and crashed/ got blunts? got trees got birds to smash/ got pumps got 3's desert birds and mags/ got jumped grabbed heat let em burn and blast/ burn his ass to ash cuz the terms was bad left a ***** in the dirt like worms and grass
this was on some uptown spit vibe. I can dig this type of ignant isht now and then.
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