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Buddah MAC
12-03-08, 05:17 PM
Higgs Boson ****, if you seeing me you're witnessing
my energy becoming masses, lemme get this thing
beyond theoretical, claim this Buddah on your medical
may seem antithetical but it ain't heretical
to claim a new Buddhism, ain't no "who is him?"
next Vishnu avatar in his newest skin
truest when the doubters can't deny it
aiming where the sky sit, hope's last client
and the CEO, no bonus this year
empty out the pockets and polly with my peers
get the "next ****" we always on about
evicted from dreams and futher from our mouth
to congregation's ear, yall only devout in fear
and since these tithings taxed, ledger's clear
refund overdue and under-outraged
acting like you're audience 'steada on the stage
this sage set to train his replacement
first step: bring the spotlight back to the basement
underground placement has earth that's adjacent
future mirror you're facing so time won't be wasted
aced it, oh, just the afterlife prerequisite
so if I acquiesce my immortality, I'm set to get
vacation homes in both spots, let me sit
and contemplate the contradiction, kid you sick
if you think I'm on my ass in this stand taking time
mother**** fate, my hands making mine
forsaking shine and ain't shaking iron
unless conventional means means still denying
our ascension, mother of invention
is necessity, so end apprehension
and get on a creation kick, in that sense, creationist
new universe left each time words exit lips

Sicilian Spit
12-05-08, 12:18 AM
Beginning was strong. End was strong. Middle fell off a bit in my opinion. I kinda lost track of the flow there. Creative though, overall nice vocabulary. Not a whole lot of wordplay. Pretty good.

W.I.Z.E.
12-12-08, 03:44 PM
it's like I come to this page and no one writes well anymore. This is so far below what I'm used to seeing from you kid.


You ight?!