Fireside Chat

[Sicilian Spit]

Panty dropper... Technical feedback would be especially appreciated.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/52145516392b9185/

We at my place, on the flo' by the fireplace
I'm down low, now I know how your thigh taste
In your fly lace, wit your fly face
Dro and Patron that we on got us sideways
So I tear it up
On a bearskin rug while our bare skin rub
Not a pair in love, two sexual creatures
Wit a camera, makin nude sexual features
An Oscar award winner
I'm eatin you up like I can't afford dinner
Born sinner, Im watchin your form shimmer
In the light, outta sight as I'm makin it more dimmer
You can't stop your panting
When I unhook your bra and then drop your panties
Like Shock G went and put the satin in 'em
But I'm Don V. and I'm pullin platinum women
You my priceless diamond
I'm rockin you all night and my ice is shinin
Got you all hot and bothered, my device is rhymin
Makin love wit chemistry and the nicest timing

(Hook)
So come relieve your stress
Let your hair down and relieve your dress
Stay by my side, just leave the rest
Please believe you about to receive the best
And girl I'm not playin around
Gimme one naughty look and I'm layin you down
Whether you live in The City or you stay in The Town
You know the Don, my sexual display is renowned

We at yo' place, on the flo' in the do' space
It's no race, throw it down at a slow pace
No base, but I know that the dro laced
Feelin yourself, bout to showcase the O-face
Let's move to the waterbed
Before your legs spread girl give me a lotta head
I reciprocate, that's what I stipulate
Get you ready for the pipe wit the way that I manipulate
Your erogenous zones
Gotcha head swoonin when you catch a waft of cologne
We off on our own, so don't soften your moans
And then take me on a long flight to Boston and home**
Wit strawberries and chocolate
Stayin in it till I'm spinnin and 7 o'clock hit
Body smooth as Silk and your lettin me Shock it
Now ya boy in the money like you gettin me stock tips
Wit no fluctuations
Lightweight feelin you, but I duck relations
Romantic, so tantric when I f*ck wit patience
So the not-pipin population loves to hate Vince

(Hook)

We in a tower on the water, in the shower
Clean and sexy, never sour to devour
Don't slip while I'm grippin your hips
Well-equipped for the dip while I'm stickin a ripper
Turn the temperature down
You get way too hot when this pimp is around
Goin so hard that I got you limpin around
I can't help it girl you know you wear the skimpiest gowns
Next up pin you up on the sink
Don't think just drink me in and love me in sync
Open up the door a crack to release the steam
Stay wit me forever more you'll never cease to cream
Now let's take it down to the bathmat
Low for days like the Dow Jones and Nasdaq
The face so pretty, ya titties and ass fat
I seen you and was sure that I would wanna harass that
So come f*ck wit the Don
My body is a property you lucky to don
No matter where we doin it we got a connection
Makin love without protection and a lot of affection

(Hook)

**Bay Area term for getting some boss head

[W.I.Z.E.]

so in your other joint I talked about how some of the lines were elementary. WELL, it looks like you decided to put the bulk of them in this joint right here. I mean I applaud your effort but the lyrics to this were just too basic. And since I just read another joint of your where you used the same rhyme scheme/flow it was repetitive to me.

[Sicilian Spit]

Yea man you know you gotta dumb it down for the b*tches! haha, good look though. If you didn't check the audio, give it a look though. I do think I sound better than I read.