The Doctrine

[king_k4life]

Straight talk no innuendo’s I stay on my Nintendo, cause without games it just might get real, and I might just feel, I might just kill a *****, how you figure a ***** be getting disfigured, I’m sicker , straight up dying n only getting iller, not cocky just self aware, get up in the mirror n just stare, like ***** I’m here, call me the Calvary, just tryna salvage my kingdom, like your majesty, I know you may be mad me, but I’ll gladly locate the heart n stab the, n sadly I don’t give a damn about myself, so **** how you feel, live with reckless abandon , so **** how I heal, **** how it’s real, I’m living a movie, sue me, ya done? well Imma have to do me..

:afro:

[Sicilian Spit]

Sh*t's aight. Beginning is strong, end is decent, middle is weak. You should write in line form too, it's easier to read.

[KingOfSugaHill]

It was ok.

[W.I.Z.E.]

"get up in the mirror n just stare, like ***** I’m here, call me the Calvary, just tryna salvage my kingdom, like your majesty, I know you may be mad me, but I’ll gladly locate the heart n stab the,'

:smh:

this was just sillyness on a page.