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Mukel
11-05-08, 09:40 PM
your hurtin cos your family are ashamed of you,
you messed up you made them all feel a fool,
so whats your next step for progression then,
your the rooster tryna find a hen,
im spillin my soul with this ink and pen,
when it all stops, yo, what happens then,
do we fall and stop fighting,
or light up the sky like lightning,
life is like horror, ****s frightening,
like a ufo i see a sighting,
of the man that i use to be,
**** is weird to me, but it happens to be truth,
never understood it too, but i'll believe it through you,
move my soul with my tales and rhymes,
you'll never know of my wicked crimes,
man stricken with the guilt behind,
my eyes are all buggin out,
you can see that there filled with doubt,
couldnt get a job, im a layabout,
robbed a store, let the uzi out,
now im wonderin when they'll let me out,
should of got a normal 9 to 5,
now im serving 5 to 9, **** where living in these wicked times

MaCRonI
11-06-08, 12:08 AM
This was ight. the flow was good, but the rhymes were way too basic. You'd have to step up your complexity up a bit and elevate duke.

5.6/10