Oh-Mix #1: Shoot Me Down feat. TheMan080 aka Swagger Vance

[theman080]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/20098036999664f1/
peep

[Child Proof]

Dope lyrics...bad delivery. Your breathing seems strained and your sound doesn't seem natural IMO. Kinda like you wanna sound a certain way. U white? Jus curious.

[theman080]

White as the semi-dirty driven-on snow?...yes...

I tried to switch my delivery on this one alittle, wrote it in like 10 minutes....my voice I do struggle with cuz i cant get it to sound consistently the same track to track, didnt have any trouble with breath control that I noticed...but yea...

appreciate the feed, any more specific things you have to say on delivery id appreciate as well.

[Sicilian Spit]

Lyrics coo but deliverys a little off. Lil Wayne weak too. Lyrically I think most of us are better than him, he's a perfect example of hip pop. With some production help your flow would probably sound a little smoother, I have some of the same problems with no studio, etc.

[Truelyrics]

man for some reason I can't open OR dl this.