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Avalon Artorius
06-14-08, 07:04 PM
Title is self explanatory....



Haven’t ripped a hole into Sohh ina while.....
So spread em, Cus I’m about to rip this whole **** with a rhyme.....
Its basic, but you gotta feel what I’m feelin inside......
I’m Satan, ice the flesh wound, just to keep you alive....
The pavement, is where I sleep, tears of blood when I cry.....
Burn my body in the ocean, like Beowolf when he died.....
Shoot you from the ground up, while you’re facing away.....
You hear me pump twice, before the shell propels from the gauge....
You knew the back of his head was a mess, from the look on his face...
Gotta fingerprint ID, because of the look on his face…(ima Beast)…...

Sicilian Spit
06-14-08, 09:00 PM
Flow was coo. Rhymin was off. The first four rhymes were while/rhyme/inside/alive, none of which rhymes with one another. But whatever, I could tell you wrote it off the tippy and didn't put 2 much into it.

BigE214
06-15-08, 03:58 PM
Flow was coo. Rhymin was off. The first four rhymes were while/rhyme/inside/alive, none of which rhymes with one another. But whatever, I could tell you wrote it off the tippy and didn't put 2 much into it.
you gotta stretch the endings..whileeee...rhymeeeee :yes:

tolo602
06-18-08, 06:05 PM
this that old ditty bop..
so many girls i got to titty hop..
from girl to girl, make the city hot..
and not even the city cop..
can make me stop..
watch when your album drop..
its gonna fat boy belly flop..
my album is that ninja karate chop..
and i smoke the dankest crop..
its always four twenty on my clock..
and i told your girl not to bite my cock..
so she proceeded to slob on the knob..
i thought you said she was a snob..
cause she took the rod, wit out a pause..

just phucking around at work, bored as hell... peace!

BigE214
06-18-08, 06:09 PM
this that old ditty bop..
so many girls i got to titty hop..
from girl to girl, make the city hot..
and not even the city cop..
can make me stop..
watch when your album drop..
its gonna fat boy belly flop..
my album is that ninja karate chop..
and i smoke the dankest crop..
its always four twenty on my clock..
and i told your girl not to bite my cock..
so she proceeded to slob on the knob..
i thought you said she was a snob..
cause she took the rod, wit out a pause..

just phucking around at work, bored as hell... peace!

Chours 2X

now crank and stump
do tha humpty hump
I say, I say crank (ayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee)
*pause for a sec*
SLAP THAT HOE (Ayyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeee)
crank, crank,crank,crank

tolo602
06-18-08, 06:11 PM
Chours 2X
now crank and stump
do tha humpty hump
I say, I say crank (ayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee)
*pause for a sec*
SLAP THAT HOE (Ayyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeee)
crank, crank,crank,crank


damn im bout to do weezy numbers....

BigE214
06-18-08, 06:12 PM
damn im bout to do weezy numbers....
:laugh:

thats all i could come up with in my state of boredom :smh:

Edit: give me a word and imma give you ten bars, maybe 16

tolo602
06-18-08, 06:16 PM
:laugh:

thats all i could come up with in my state of boredom :smh:

Edit: give me a word and imma give you ten bars, maybe 16

sarcasm...

BigE214
06-18-08, 06:24 PM
sarcasm...

:confused::dry:

:yes::headphones:

sacasm got me laughing..blowin smoke fucck my asthma
4's on the Roadmaster, windows clearer than casper
laughin at these nigggas cause i don came from nothing
not a goon, ima playa but i can hit tha chirp button
:smh:

I quit

tolo602
06-18-08, 06:37 PM
its all good, just cant wait to get my cake, like trump..
ask them girls im like a camel cause i got to hump..
me no chump me the dump, i mean the s#it..
the rhymes stay plump, dropping hits..
lets get crunk, avoid the blitz..
going far, to the inzone b!tch..
if this was nascar youl be in those pits..
ill be driving sh!t with sponsorships..
or ill be in biblacal style scripts...
or like when the moon and sun colide, i just eclipse....


haha phuck it im bored...

BigE214
06-18-08, 07:14 PM
its all good, just cant wait to get my cake, like trump..
ask them girls im like a camel cause i got to hump..
me no chump me the dump, i mean the s#it..
the rhymes stay plump, dropping hits..
lets get crunk, avoid the blitz..
going far, to the inzone b!tch..
if this was nascar youl be in those pits..
ill be driving sh!t with sponsorships..
or ill be in biblacal style scripts...
or like when the moon and sun colide, i just eclipse....


clips, dont trip, full clip- hit ya hip
gymnastics nigggas, tripple axles back flips
bad white girl with black ass and lips
strippin at tha palace but bring me da tips
I dont trick, but i got it and it stay in my wallet
nigggas on cruise control, we upgarded to auto pilot

tolo602
06-18-08, 07:49 PM
clips, dont trip, full clip- hit ya hip
gymnastics nigggas, tripple axles back flips
bad white girl with black ass and lips
strippin at tha palace but bring me da tips
I dont trick, but i got it and it stay in my wallet
nigggas on cruise control, we upgarded to auto pilot

pass the mic cord thru the eyelet..
the color of my weed is Violette..

TruthB4Hate
06-21-08, 07:39 PM
too many drinks and cigarettes have my liver steadily dying
find receipts from last night for **** i 'on't remember buying
reminisce on last winter, i spent most of december crying
told my family their gifts were coming, but they knew i was lying
i should quit, but the **** i wanna live long for?
no matter how much money i get, i'll want lots more
things might change in the future, but - i'm not sure
bill collectors started camping outside my door
one more drag of this cigarette, and that's it
**** 16, 10 bars is all that's in my head

illpappa
06-21-08, 11:45 PM
i cant spit no more