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neger187
04-27-08, 03:20 PM
beat 1 (http://www.zshare.net/audio/11181994f9c119bd/)
beat 2 (http://www.zshare.net/audio/111821232e1ea6c2/)

Aje
04-28-08, 08:58 PM
This guy needs some feedback...I hate when i see no replies in a thread @ beat club. Get on this fellas!

I'ma peep after I finish this beat I'm working on.

Aje
04-28-08, 09:02 PM
wow that first one is really phuckin chill. It reminds me of some shyt that would be ona Keith Murray album circa '95 or somin...I phucks with this, man. What you using?

This second joint is cool. The snare/clap sounds a bit too much like someone breaking a plastic cup on a table but I see where you going with this. Still waiting on the kick though...maybe there's no kick for a reason. This is also chill though. This sounds like a Jay Dee (J Dilla) track that Slum Vill or Com would get on. Of course Slum Village would probably talk about oral sex or a menage or somin...but this is fly. Bass is ill.

Roxx the King
04-28-08, 09:22 PM
beat 1 (http://www.zshare.net/audio/11181994f9c119bd/)
beat 2 (http://www.zshare.net/audio/111821232e1ea6c2/)

wifey thought the 1st beat was ok. I think if you expand on it a lil more it could be hotter. sometimes simple is good but in this case i think you have a good foundation

the secong beat illicitted zero response from wifey. prolly cuz the blunt is half finish and she aint know what I was askin, lol. Naw but I like the vibe in that one. maybe some light strings for the hook and it would be heat.

:thumbsup:

Drumkitz
04-28-08, 09:22 PM
yeah the first beat definitely takes me back to keith murray enigma.. dope!!! definite hip hop spot joint... the second im not sure i understand what u were doin with the sample.. i like the drums tho.. real clean and smooth but the sample didnt fit in pocket..try to lay it down a different way.. it may come out tighter.. i loved them drums tho..

The Nastiest
04-28-08, 11:03 PM
The first one is pretty good, but it does need a little something extra in the verse to keep it alive.

Second one feels weird initially, but after a while it just sinks in. It needs to be sung over, though. And again, needs some change up or additions to keep it alive

neger187
05-02-08, 10:08 AM
i re-layered the samples on the second beat and added a deep 808 kick.

http://www.myspace.com/neger187

second beat = 20080501

DJ TEKNIK
05-02-08, 11:30 AM
The first one is pretty good, but it does need a little something extra in the verse to keep it alive.

Second one feels weird initially, but after a while it just sinks in. It needs to be sung over, though. And again, needs some change up or additions to keep it alive


C/S is not bad at all thou..

MACADO
05-02-08, 01:05 PM
:smoker::smoker::smoker::smoker:The first one is on some ol East Coast, back Channel Live in a Cipher with Black Moon, and Common type ****. I always liked beats liek this an nmiggas dont even make beats like this too much. I likes this
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The Second one.....................
[Flavor]WOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!![FLAV]
This reeks of medical weed and Slum Village. I am freestylin too this as we speak. Good **** main:smoker::smoker::smoker::smoker:

EVIL
05-02-08, 02:24 PM
nice layed back joints right there!!!

sound like something you would hear on def jams elevator.

i love this type of shyt.