W.I.Z.E. vs. Eternal Reflection (COME VOTE)

[W.I.Z.E.]

Post by Tuesday 4/29.

[eternal reflection]

Well I Hope Nocturnal Or Whoever U Were Referring To In The Title Responds..it'd Be A Shame If He No Showed.

[W.I.Z.E.]

Well I Hope Nocturnal Or Whoever U Were Referring To In The Title Responds..it'd Be A Shame If He No Showed.

U know it's you....


:mad:

[#1rapper]

..tick tock muthafukkas

[W.I.Z.E.]

U used to be hot, lately you’ve been shakin’ off frost,
Damn he fell off, is What the people lately will talk (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=1012490)
U laid your vocals your producer stayed late taking them off,
Like “why the f@ck he had to rhyme since Burger King laid him off?
Go try and diss my audio - call Denzel,
Cuz there aint no Great Debate my sh!t is greater than yours.
Spit your “filler/punch" format it’s played and the worst.
Like...

W.I.Z.E. is trying to FIND FOREVER,
but he lacks COMMON SENSE in his songs. :dry:

I got these forums covered while you straight takin’ it off,
Exposin’ u azz pasted in song showin’ Lace in your thongs.
Rappin’ repetitive rhymes rape replace trace of remorse,
I’m a blessin’ and five mics call me Mase at the Source,
Bullets? spit Magazines should grace each page of the Source.
With each Single I’m Engaged to Hit the stage to perform,
I Married talent they should try and raise your case for Divorce.
Aint no question I got the Answer like the Lakers Playoff
U aint the King Dream your pitch Falsetto faking the force,
Damn my rhyme scheme is tight, flow, word play and all.
The last time you was hot there were no forums at all,
Just one thread, two members and three cats to face off.
That third member was your alias and you killed him off,
And left his remains, YOU lackin’ skills, brains and balls.
Since you back in this B!tch let me Get at you Dog,
U aint been hot since DMX's hair fell off
Used to be a Legend, lost the Will to bare the cross,
The air I scorch while u scared to flare a torch.

[Striggity]

ouch.

I'm new here...and i'm not familiar w/ u cats...but that **** was impressive.

*waits for other d00d*

[energy]

"impressive"?

Take the word "off" out of that verse and you've got nothing left.
The man rhymed "source" with "source", "all" with "all" and "off" with "off" many times.
Gahbage.

But uh... at least he showed.

[Nocturnal Erection]

WIZE, YOU WACK! Be a copy editor... why rapper? /
beating me? Keep it up like viagra; I.seek.emcees.to.bag.up //

I don't even gotta - waste time.to.sniff.you.out/
you still wet behind the ears - and been yeaaars.with
that mono.lithic style!//

Just being blunt! you getting bonged by youngins
stragglin home from school/
is more a regular occurance
than Eminems -in Al.Jolsten's stool!//

Yea i know.. you gone' say i was stretchin flow/
I could stretch it tho.. my de-livery opens contractions//
so???? you've been an opening act son!?!///

you've got a manly man dancing- on ya myspace page/
www.myspace.com/djwizeva (http://http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=57962916)
that's a homoerotic by day, homo by night way.to.say:"I'm Gay"!//

Son
take it from me:
It's over for you!
And pleaaasssseeee
before you answer with an audio track...

some motor oil!

[Nocturnal Erection]

...

[eternal reflection]

..now I gotta DOME CHECK MODERATORS
i'll make you COME TO TERMS like PHONE SEX OPERATORS

well..MAYBE :unsure:

if you weren't plaigerizing (NAS, AZ, KOOL G RAP) RHYME SCHEMES, I could
respect YOU :whistle:

PROBABLY :smh:

..but you like a HUMAN CLONE
you ain't got an ORIGINAL BONE IN YOUR BODY :laugh:
my etiquette undedited was and is the predicate

YOU SAID IT YOURSELF (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=1010903)

your career went DUE SOUTH like you OWE A CONFEDERATE

this is history reiterrated
I PATENTED THE WHEEL
NOT revisionist; REVISITED
this is LEVITICUS
..STILL ?
with no RECORDS DISTRIBUTED
I can only attribute it to whats been exhibited

YOUR SUBPAR SKILL

YOU ALREADY TOOK ONE LOSS :yes:
it's NOTHING to super size the deficit
I SET THE STANDARD
YOU just criticized it's prerequisites
I GUESS :blush:
the criterion was the basis for your irrelevance

AND

YOU DO YOURSELF A DISSERVICE
trying to juxtapose THE MOST PREVALENT :king:
how can you be elitist, when all you've done is get defeated :thumbsdow
on all fours is STILL
the only way you SUCK SEED IN :ohmy:
thats ORAL BOTANY, and
this ain't a quarrel honestly :D
cause your flow is STRAIGHT REDUNDANT, like HETEROSEXUAL MONOTONY :huh:
SOHH; be cognizant of THE CONSUMMATE

STILL

demonstrative with consonants, the
PLAY ON WORDS consulate
look at what he accomplishes
accomplice less, and
FUKK CONTINENCE, and
your incompetence
I could reunite the continents with my consciousness, and
i'm being modest biitch :laugh:

my LEGEND speaks for itself, however much
YOU SMEAR IT, and
YOU'VE NEVER BEEN considered one of the best
how's that for some TRUE LYRICS
YOUR WORDPLAYS BEEN LACKING FOR YEARS ON END, and
YOUR AUDIO :headphone:weirdo::angry::smh:
I PRAY TO GOD, I DON'T HAVE TO HEAR IT AGAIN
nigguhs saying i'm past my prime thats asinine :dry:
when your SYMMETRY IS MANDATORY, that means
YOU FORCING LINES HAHAHAHAHA
the ruler's back with stool intact
YOU WASHED UP :yes:
thats why this duel is wack
ANOTHER LOSS
has to be disparaging
YOU PALE IN COMPARISON, and
YOUR BOASTS ARE WEARING THIN
THE MASTER of the DOUBLE, and
TRIPLE ENTENDRE, spawned the
dawn of a whole new genre, and
i'm still the; UNDISPUTED
YOU CAN'T REFUTE IT
made nigguhs get with the program
UNRECRUITED !!!!!

[W.I.Z.E.]

Yo...ER is it cool if I delete out the non verse related posts. In particular Nocturnal Erection.

[keylomc3]

i'll make you COME TO TERMS like PHONE SEX OPERATORS

..but you like a HUMAN CLONE
you ain't got an ORIGINAL BONE IN YOUR BODY :laugh: Direct hit & clever

your career went DUE SOUTH like you OWE A CONFEDERATE

with no RECORDS DISTRIBUTED
I can only attribute it to whats been exhibited

how can you be elitist, when all you've done is get defeated :thumbsdow
on all fours is STILL
the only way you SUCK SEED IN :ohmy: Lord

cause your flow is STRAIGHT REDUNDANT, like HETEROSEXUAL MONOTONY :huh: Not bad

my LEGEND speaks for itself, however much
YOU SMEAR IT, and
YOU'VE NEVER BEEN considered one of the best
how's that for some TRUE LYRICS ouch

when your SYMMETRY IS MANDATORY, that means
YOU FORCING LINES HAHAHAHAHA sick... just sick


Never cease to amaze with the ridiculous **** you come up with. You've improved the flow over the years too.


Spit your “filler/punch" format it’s played and the worst.
Like...
W.I.Z.E. is trying to FIND FOREVER,
but he lacks COMMON SENSE in his songs. :dry: Good direct attack

U aint the King Dream your pitch Falsetto faking the force, Decent...some prolly won't get it

The last time you was hot there were no forums at all, lol...nice

Used to be a Legend, lost the Will to bare the cross, Again, decent reference, it'll go over some heads

The air I scorch while u scared to flare a torch. OK


Flow was nice, as usual... some decent hits.

Vote --> ER

[theman080]

Damn...

WIZE, I expected better from you, you started off a lil slow but once you got it going your attack became steady enough. The whole 'the last time you were hot...killed his alias shyt' was funny. The flow was on point, not your best tho, although you did carry that one flow for a long ass time. Points for droppin first...

ER...I expected some rust and there was a decent amount of filler but gatdayum the attack was on point. The wordplay and the flow were hitting on all cylinders this was seriously a good read, Ive seen one or two of the wordplays before but thats bound to happen...

Anyway...ER gets this by a decent amount, props on actualy getting a battle completed...

V/ER

[the puppetmaster]

U used to be hot, lately you’ve been shakin’ off frost,
Damn he fell off, is What the people lately will talk (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=1012490)

- Ok opener, I think you coulda thrown this one out there harder though.


U laid your vocals your producer stayed late taking them off,
Like “why the f@ck he had to rhyme since Burger King laid him off?

- lol. .. simple but this made me chuckle.


Go try and diss my audio - call Denzel,
Cuz there aint no Great Debate my sh!t is greater than yours.
Spit your “filler/punch" format it’s played and the worst.
Like...

W.I.Z.E. is trying to FIND FOREVER,
but he lacks COMMON SENSE in his songs. :dry:


- This section was HEAT. You threw it before it could be thrown against you.


I got these forums covered while you straight takin’ it off,
Exposin’ u azz pasted in song showin’ Lace in your thongs.

- I liked the first part, ugh. . the second part was beneath you bruh.. . if courtdog had thrown that punch it woulda been decent for him. Unfortunately ur held to a different standard


Rappin’ repetitive rhymes rape replace trace of remorse,
I’m a blessin’ and five mics call me Mase at the Source,

- I like the fact that ur making a point of trying to show a blend of flow and attack.

Bullets? spit Magazines should grace each page of the Source.
With each Single I’m Engaged to Hit the stage to perform,
I Married talent they should try and raise your case for Divorce.
Aint no question I got the Answer like the Lakers Playoff

- wordplay was pretty sharp here. .. strong set. Not the most damaging but it was a strong set up and self hype.


U aint the King Dream your pitch Falsetto faking the force
Damn my rhyme scheme is tight, flow, word play and all.

- Liked the falsetto flip. Haven’t seen it yet. Hope more cats catch it.


The last time you was hot there were no forums at all,
Just one thread, two members and three cats to face off.

- LMAO. Good one.

That third member was your alias and you killed him off,
And left his remains, YOU lackin’ skills, brains and balls.

- lol.. . NOW ur striking.


Since you back in this B!tch let me Get at you Dog,
U aint been hot since DMX's hair fell off

- Didn’t like this.. . again it’s beneath you

Used to be a Legend, lost the Will to bare the cross,
The air I scorch while u scared to flare a torch.


I liked the closer. .. clean and stiff hook to the body.



..now I gotta DOME CHECK MODERATORS
i'll make you COME TO TERMS like PHONE SEX OPERATORS

- Good opener, I think you might have used every variation of the come punchline in at some point.


well..MAYBE :unsure:
if you weren't plaigerizing (NAS, AZ, KOOL G RAP) RHYME SCHEMES, I could
respect YOU :whistle:
PROBABLY :smh:
..but you like a HUMAN CLONE
you ain't got an ORIGINAL BONE IN YOUR BODY :laugh:

- Ouch. Strong.


my etiquette undedited was and is the predicate
YOU SAID IT YOURSELF (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=1010903)
your career went DUE SOUTH like you OWE A CONFEDERATE
this is history reiterrated
I PATENTED THE WHEEL
NOT revisionist; REVISITED
this is LEVITICUS

- I was worried that thread would be used against W.I.Z.E. somehow.


..STILL ?
with no RECORDS DISTRIBUTED
I can only attribute it to whats been exhibited
YOUR SUBPAR SKILL
YOU ALREADY TOOK ONE LOSS :yes:
it's NOTHING to super size the deficit
I SET THE STANDARD
YOU just criticized it's prerequisites

- Sardonic tone, very dismissive. …


I GUESS :blush:
the criterion was the basis for your irrelevance
AND
YOU DO YOURSELF A DISSERVICE
trying to juxtapose THE MOST PREVALENT :king:
how can you be elitist, when all you've done is get defeated
:thumbsdow
on all fours is STILL
the only way you SUCK SEED IN :ohmy:

- I’ve been around long enough to have seen variations of that line so it didn’t WOW me. But it was brutal in this exchange


thats ORAL BOTANY, and
this ain't a quarrel honestly :D
cause your flow is STRAIGHT REDUNDANT, like HETEROSEXUAL MONOTONY :huh:

- Good hit. ..


SOHH; be cognizant of THE CONSUMMATE
STILL
demonstrative with consonants, the
PLAY ON WORDS consulate
look at what he accomplishes
accomplice less, and
FUKK CONTINENCE, and
your incompetence
I could reunite the continents with my consciousness, and
i'm being modest biitch :laugh:

- I saw this as more of a flip of WIZE’s style. Cool



my LEGEND speaks for itself, however much
YOU SMEAR IT, and
YOU'VE NEVER BEEN considered one of the best
how's that for some TRUE LYRICS

- Ouch. This is getting ugly.

YOUR WORDPLAYS BEEN LACKING FOR YEARS ON END, and
YOUR AUDIO :headphone:weirdo::angry::smh:
I PRAY TO GOD, I DON'T HAVE TO HEAR IT AGAIN

- Meh, not feelin this set

nigguhs saying i'm past my prime thats asinine :dry:
when your SYMMETRY IS MANDATORY, that means
YOU FORCING LINES HAHAHAHAHA

- back on the bully shyt

the ruler's back with stool intact
YOU WASHED UP :yes:
thats why this duel is wack
ANOTHER LOSS
has to be disparaging
YOU PALE IN COMPARISON, and
YOUR BOASTS ARE WEARING THIN
THE MASTER of the DOUBLE, and
TRIPLE ENTENDRE, spawned the
dawn of a whole new genre, and
i'm still the; UNDISPUTED
YOU CAN'T REFUTE IT
made nigguhs get with the program
UNRECRUITED !!!!!

- Decent closer, a bit more “self hype” than I prefer for a close but nonetheless.




Ok Gentlemen. .. W.I.Z.E. I respect you because you are one of the few cats over the years that if you call someone out or are called out you drop right away. No delaying. I think that you would have benefited from taking your time here because ER pulled out the scalpel and dissected you. I don’t wanna call it rust because I’ve seen recent work and I don’t think it’s that. I think its your no BS no delay attitude that got you here.
ER is normally exact in his attacks just as he was here,It felt he baited you into a punchline game which isn’t your strength, and he beat you on his turf. ER you did what I expected here and did it in clean fashion.


Vote: ER


Props to both ya’ll dudes for showing up as promised. Shyt like this makes me miss being in battle predator mode.



-PM-

[Neo Regular]

Wize won off this line alone:

U aint been hot since DMX's hair fell off

It was a wrap.

[DJ Mylie]

Wize won, hes alright tho..

[W.I.Z.E.]

Thanks Neo and Mylie, PM, Keylo and theman thanks for breaking your votes down. If the rest of yall could do the same that would be great just to make it fair.


So Far

ER - 3
W.I.Z.E. - 2

[energy]

Not even close.
ER all the way.

And Wize, I saw your "energy vs. Wize" thread.
I can't tell if you're trying to be fun or if you got you're feelings hurt.
Either way, I'm not really interested.

Thanks for the read fellas.

[Striggity]

Wow..interesting...

ER verse was insane. ...

I'ma have to give it to ER...his schemes and lines were nuts.
round 2...plz. lol

[Propaganda]

i got er in this...dude pretty much ripped it. some real hard personals and some good punches. that original bone line was sick.

[W.I.Z.E.]

Not even close.
ER all the way.
And Wize, I saw your "energy vs. Wize" thread.
I can't tell if you're trying to be fun or if you got you're feelings hurt.
Either way, I'm not really interested.
Thanks for the read fellas.



Nah it was a simple thread. You made some incorrect assumptions that I wanted to challenge in a combatative sense.

seeing how your Asia's favorite Emcee :confused: . Just consider me... (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=1005429)

But you're not interested so it's cool.

[W.I.Z.E.]

round 2...plz. lol


No Round 2. I quit and I'm :grrr:

Good isht with the win ER. Can't really take nothing away from you on this one.

Thanks to cats that at least caught some of the lines that I didn't think everyone would catch.

[eternal reflection]

Nah it was a simple thread. You made some incorrect assumptions that I wanted to challenge in a combatative sense.

seeing how your Asia's favorite Emcee :confused: . Just consider me... (http://forums.sohh.com/showthread.php?t=1005429)

But you're not interested so it's cool.



stop spamming the thread nigguh..:laugh:

[energy]

I made no assumptions.
Your use of the word leads me to believe
that you don't comprehend it's meaning.

I made observations.
Acute at that...
so do dat do dat do do do do dat

[W.I.Z.E.]

First YOU said....

"impressive"?
Take the word "off" out of that verse and you've got nothing left.
The man rhymed "source" with "source", "all" with "all" and "off" with "off" many times.
Gahbage.
But uh... at least he showed.


I made no assumptions.
Your use of the word leads me to believe
that you don't comprehend it's meaning.



as·sump·tion Audio Help /əˈsʌmpʃən/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[uh-suhmp-shuhn] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–noun
1. something taken for granted; a supposition: a correct assumption.
2. the act of taking for granted or supposing.

www.websters.com



Let's try to use this word in a sentence that acutely depicts my point better for YOU.

You took for granted that even if you didn't minimize my verse down to it's rhyming words at the end of it's lines...that you would have noticed that:

A.) There is wordplay, humor and alliteration
B.) The overall content was personal
C.) That type of rhyme scheme (mostly rhyming the last few syllables consecutively over the span of a verse) is difficult to carry out while keeping the integrity of items of A and B.

Now if you have more to say...as I stated earlier. LET'S do it through a battle. Since you're so good.

P.S. - The irony of what you're saying is who you quoted. Hope that doesn't go over your head. lol.

P.S.S. - I'm done slaying you here. Want more battle? If not post away or sit in silence. I would hate to see you wasted your energy.

[energy]

I love how you tried to sound so smart and then couldn't form a correct and complete sentence. Sh!t has me and the guy I work with dying over here!

assume: take to be the case or to be true; accept without verification or proof; "I assume his train was late"

You posted the definition. Read it. You are wrong. I made no assumptions. I did not assume anything. I read the verse and it was clearly wack as f@ck. No one assumed, idiot. I assumed, before I read it, that it would be terrible. However, you posted it and I read it and judged it as awful. No assumptions. I verified my assumption when I read it you f@cking retard. You lost and now you're crying. If you don't want to be judged stop screaming baaaatttlllle everywhere. You posted it to be judged and only had a problem with the one poster who judged your sh!t as straight gahbage. You're see through. And ghosts don't scare me buddy....

[W.I.Z.E.]

I love how you tried to sound so smart and then couldn't form a correct and complete sentence. Sh!t has me and the guy I work with dying over here!
assume: take to be the case or to be true; accept without verification or proof; "I assume his train was late"
You posted the definition. Read it. You are wrong. I made no assumptions. I did not assume anything. I read the verse and it was clearly wack as f@ck. No one assumed, idiot. I assumed, before I read it, that it would be terrible. However, you posted it and I read it and judged it as awful. No assumptions. I verified my assumption when I read it you f@cking retard. You lost and now you're crying. If you don't want to be judged stop screaming baaaatttlllle everywhere. You posted it to be judged and only had a problem with the one poster who judged your sh!t as straight gahbage. You're see through. And ghosts don't scare me buddy....




:laugh:

shall we say...emotional

[energy]

Did you really just call my response emotional when you dug out the dictionary definition and posted a rant twice as long as mine? nah couldn't be.

Well, i never thought that you'd be so quick to admit it but yeah... that's exactly what you're being. Emotional over your loss. Do you ever win battles here? You're a f@cking moderator. Just look at the state of this forum and you can see how effective you are. You're a big fish in a small pond with a god complex that I'd tear through like wet toilet paper.

And you use phrases like, "shall we" when you talk Shi!t.

[yaga]

I love how you tried to sound so smart and then couldn't form a correct and complete sentence. Sh!t has me and the guy I work with dying over here!
assume: take to be the case or to be true; accept without verification or proof; "I assume his train was late"
You posted the definition. Read it. You are wrong. I made no assumptions. I did not assume anything. I read the verse and it was clearly wack as f@ck. No one assumed, idiot. I assumed, before I read it, that it would be terrible. However, you posted it and I read it and judged it as awful. No assumptions. I verified my assumption when I read it you f@cking retard. You lost and now you're crying. If you don't want to be judged stop screaming baaaatttlllle everywhere. You posted it to be judged and only had a problem with the one poster who judged your sh!t as straight gahbage. You're see through. And ghosts don't scare me buddy....

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[Neo Regular]

Wize won off this line alone:
U aint been hot since DMX's hair fell off
It was a wrap.

READ AGAIN.
WIZE WON OFF THIS LINE ALONE.

[eternal reflection]

READ AGAIN.
WIZE WON OFF THIS LINE ALONE.

:dry:

..man shut yo wack ass up nigguh whatever u have to say is invalid.

[BeBorn]

I'll give it to wize

[mntlplx]

ok, WIZE got away with some bullsh!+... some of dem lines didn't rhyme at all. Looked like a Prodigy verse with a Cassidy flow :laugh:

ER verse was pretty dope... a legit "keystyle" verse... props...

MNTLPLX

[Black Broadway]

Well, this is my first time reading an e-battle. Heard about them, but I've never seen one. Impressive to say the least.

There are some inherent difficulties in judging the text of the rhyme, but I'd have to give this one to W.I.Z.E.

But mostly because I couldn't really figure out ER's flow. Like, how he would've sounded rhyming it.

Both emcees are dope though. Very entertaining.

-Cool Cee Brown
http://coolceebrown.blogspot.com