Death Whispers

[Buddah MAC]

when hurtin', we filled with breath
then flirtin' we caught with death
oedipally sought her breasts
but when she lost the vest
ain't even saw the age, but a larger story told
cuz beyond thinkin' old, we pictured her cold
yet she mad fresh, soft and supple flesh
thoughts begin stirrin' of me & her meshed
talkin' dirty in my ear now, makin it very clear how
if I drop this fear out, she'll take the mirror route
to any fantasy I got, and then rest of the plot
is she got more in store that I never even thought
possible, my optical betrays the "stop it duke"
of conscience seekin salvation, but death's awaitin
my answer, we dance there until she set to leave
I stay back, but pin achin' heart on her sleeve
and I'm left behind hollow, blank slate to build
search for substance to fill, powered souly by will

[eternal reflection]

hey man, i'mma start replying to ur **** bruh, u deserve some type of feedback..I didn't get everything in this piece, but I think I see where u were going, ur very descriptive when writing, and it flowed as usual..but wasn't that oedipally reference in reference to mom dukes ?

[W.I.Z.E.]

but wasn't that oedipally reference in reference to mom dukes ?


It's mother nature...that's lost it's way to death. Metaphorically that is.