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W.I.Z.E.
04-18-08, 03:27 PM
Took a hiatus, one of the greatest....

Call me the needle, stuck in the groove,
still I'm wayback in the haystack.

(What you say black)
Buried desires of mic holdin' in front of fans,
Grave danger my fire expired before the fan.
Dropped an EP, good reviews, showed growth,
flows dope, def, fresh but no hope,
of anything bigger - sweet bitter refined taste,
reality, there's fukkin' thousands mc's that rhyme great.
So my pupil's dilate while these pupils girate,
with an ignorance confined to a toddler child's hate.
Eclipse behind schedule so maybe I shine late,
solar systems in my eyes minute to God's gates,
I'm heightened to siphon the lightening from off of the clouds ass
Blindin' the mass imagine when I'm shinin' a flash.
Plaid and polka dots, the way my thoughts clash,
At once I sought cash...(sigh)
But stakes raise when you support gas -
In the chase for green - too much recycled off trash.
In the chase for green - doctored off M.A.S.H.
A family guy at first was shunned cancelled the show,
Now it's the hot ticket in town packing the rows.
I'm in the post game, they in the warmup's still runnin',
These cats are Arnold - I'm fukkin' Phil Drummond...

But still...
Sometimes (I'm) a has been other times a hot spitter,
Maybe I'll bury my remains right next to a hot Quitter

Mukel
04-18-08, 05:26 PM
I like this a lot, the start and the end were a bit eh...but the rest was pretty good, flow was ok too.

eternal reflection
04-18-08, 05:49 PM
..it's never too late if u got talent, Sean is like 45 right ? ..LOL, nice drop, I don't know how ur wife would feel about that last bar though, but hey atleast he's rich, LOL. I might have to drop something man..who knows, holla at ya folk.

Universe
04-19-08, 12:53 PM
I'm fukkin' Phil Drummond...
Sorry, had to quote that. Couldn't resist. I'm a child. :D

It's funny though, people usually do their best work when they think they're a has-been and have nothing new to offer. From what I read, most of your stuff is a breath of fresh air.

W.I.Z.E.
04-23-08, 12:58 PM
..it's never too late if u got talent, Sean is like 45 right ? ..LOL, nice drop, I don't know how ur wife would feel about that last bar though, but hey atleast he's rich, LOL. I might have to drop something man..who knows, holla at ya folk.


lol. SHAWN is about 42-43 but you're right. Let me know if you wanna drop something.


Universe...funny thing is why did I see Different Strokes a day after I posted this for the first time in years.