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Salah
04-10-08, 12:40 AM
Dollas and Cents, and I’m trying to be 50,
I am not I AM but I bet God is in me,

Sinner Sal is,
And Sinners Sal’s kids,
rid my soul of the old,
and make a salvage,

trying make it gold,
but my mind conjures up more ****,
so I guess, my spirit’s-just a black hole,

I go and need mo’(more)
Go-Go-Gadgets,
Salah means prayer,
and I pray for Mr. Abbott,

Success-I’mmmmmm
taking a stab at it,
I don’t mind being broke,
but my mind won’t have it,

my thought has a body of it’s own,
it’s trying to get home,
but heaven tells it get more grown,

it’s growing,
knowing it’s showing,

more mature,
more moments,

I’m at peace with it all,
guessing I’ll recieve that call when it call,
and retire a legend of the fall......

(Talking)
Excuse me, I just came here to speak my mind, nothing in particular, just my mind, tell you a little bit about me that's all, just a little bit about me....

(Rapping)
Excuse my language,
Sal languid,
vivid substance
but yet so fluid,

grew up a screw up---foolish---ness,
threw up with screw ups---gang---related,

just watching movies, and really Not a gangsta,
just fist fighting and twisted fangas,

acting movies I was more so a pranksta,
damn Sal, "you ain't even shot a banga,"

force my will, and I might
well I will,
because I do believe everything's God's will,

best friend's in a bind with them bills,
so we resorted to selling pills,

flooded the hood call me Mr. K-Ville,
in the hoopie flying like Cruella DeVille,

Looking for a 101 dimes,
pass the time on this head baby just to ease my mind,

Salah
05-28-08, 05:36 PM
this goes back up

Avalon Artorius
06-14-08, 07:11 PM
horrible..in every sense of teh word...like...stop rapping..dont quit tho..shoot urself in each hand..then quit..this was atrocious....matter of fact..ima spell atrocious wrong just so show u how much i hate this ****..its atroshus....u should start ur own lable...G.A.M...God Awful Music....

Sicilian Spit
06-14-08, 08:55 PM
It wasn't as bad as all that. There were some nice parts. But this seemed more like slam poetry.