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2Quik4U
04-05-08, 02:58 AM
Star from Afar

Gaze in the night sky, mosaic of eternal beauty
I find amongst them, a bright shining star
Captures the heart, captures my soul
Warms my existance, as it remained cold
Share your secrets bright star
Tell me just who you are
The desire of my mind's eye
Could I have her if I were to try
Reach your arms out romantic
Restless still despite the futility
Black holes surround the star
Can't match the star's shine
While wounds unlock from the cold of time
Through the wastelands of lost love
I still see this star shining up above
Longing for the embrace
Longing for the warmth
Longing for the passion
Longing for the pain
Longing for the love
Of the star from afar, let my dreams subside
With the weed and brew, my eyes closed wide
The kind winds sing songs of my temporary sorrows
Blank stare, I move along, hope to see the star tommorow

Absolut da poet
04-06-08, 09:47 AM
very nice..

thanks for droppin it..

2Quik4U
04-06-08, 02:02 PM
No problem, I thought it was ok...

sexydeltagirl
04-07-08, 05:06 PM
I can dig it...it flowed very nicely...

Props!

2Quik4U
04-08-08, 12:08 PM
^ Thanks...:)